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Old 29-05-2008, 05:12 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello i need review for my website.I would be happy to hear from you guys and ladies in the house.
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Old 29-05-2008, 05:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Personally I find the colour scheme quite depressing. Just my opinion though.
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Old 29-05-2008, 05:21 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yes i agree with Dean a little dull for my liking.
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Old 29-05-2008, 05:22 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Me three lol, could do with some brightening up
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Old 29-05-2008, 05:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Sorry have to agree, but that paypal logo looks abit crammed maybe put it under shopping basket?
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thanks i will look into that and make some changes.Vert greatful bless
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Old 29-05-2008, 06:05 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I like the colour scheme - its an upmarket look but the text lets it down - stick with a creamy colour or off-white but improve the font.

As said already - the paypal logo is a letdown
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Old 29-05-2008, 07:13 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Hi illuminati:

From an SEO point of view, that is, from a search engine result page listing point of view, and from a PageRank point of view:

Your Stats:
http://www.brulyninternationalcompany.co.uk

PageRank 0
Alexa Rank 0
Back Links 0
MSN Search Results 0
Yahoo! Search Results 0

Your domain name is new so PageRank and Alexa will take a while.. but you should have some backlinks and MSN/Yahoo results. You will get a couple backlinks from this thread soon.

You do not have any keywords /phrases in your code nor a description.

Your Title is good but offers no marketing value or industry. This needs to be comingled with your keywords. Change your title per page if possible and your keywords if possible.

Your h1 tag only has your company name in it. This is ok but how are people going to find you via search engines if they do not know your business name?

You need one paragraph or so near the top of the page to give a description of what you do or sell or what the customer will receive scattered with the keywords you have chosen in a natural manner. If you could put this paragraph in a box above the 'Categories' box in the left menu this would be best.

How you can drive traffic to your sites not using the Search Engines is by having other sites that are relevant to your site link to you. That is what forums and blogs help with and you can find link partners.

When finding link partners there are lots of things to look for but for the most part try to find sites that have the same keywords you do and at least the same or higher PageRank as you.

High PageRank will do nothing for search engine result pages, SEO will. All PageRank will do is make it easier to get sites that are in your industry, with lots of traffic and a good reputation to link to you.

Remember, use blogs and forums to help create the backlinks that will eventually give you high PageRank. You can also buy backlinks from high PR sites for a few months.

Once you create traffic then you can work on marketing and conversion.

you might want to consider using Google Webmaster Tools
http://google.com/webmasters/
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Google Analytics
http://google.com/analytics

I think you have a great site. It loads fast and I know exactly what your site does.
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I like it. Quite easy to navigate and looks professional.
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cheers thanks positive comments Respect .Being a novice i built the site myself still learning the ropes.I will do my best to stick to the wonderful advise am getting here.
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