http://cgi.ebay.co.uk/ws/eBayISAPI.d...m=250424666071 So is that a good aprouch? I just cant get round getting it decent!
so hows my priceing and listing?


cheers in advance


Popcorn

The picture is a bit naff, and the text is hard to read.
Contact Andy777 for advice and templates to make it stand out.

The pic has bad lighting and it shows other things around the room. Also the text is far to big and boring. Im not trying to depress you or anything.

Text is too big, spelling is poor.

It looks like a ten year old has written it.

People will not take you seriously with that.


I'm not trying to knock what you have done just telling you how it looks.

Cheers
Andy

in my opinion, it is too much of big fat black letters

I can see what you were trying to do with the picture, but the camera obviously isn't top notch and so the image comes out too bright with too many reflections. It'd be a good idea, in my opinion, to get a soft background (use some sort of cloth so it doesn't reflect the light) and have one of these singular items/boxes, face to the camera. Very much like the typical iphone shots;
http://billmill.org/static/refresh-c...phone_home.gif

The text is way too much "in your face", tone it down to a nice font like Verdana, Arial, or Trebuchet MS, and around 10 or 11pt or 10-12px.

J

Condense everything down - it's not a festival poster... bring it all into perspective.

Get hold of GIMP free photo editing software (google > Gimp > download), take a decent photo & touch it up.

Originally Posted by AALG_Andy

Text is too big, spelling is poor.

It looks like a ten year old has written it.

People will not take you seriously with that.


I'm not trying to knock what you have done just telling you how it looks.

Cheers
Andy

Yeah i blame my age of 13 And my dyslexia :P I tried to make it look decent but u know.. I will spell check it later

Originally Posted by Inferno House

Condense everything down - it's not a festival poster... bring it all into perspective.

Get hold of GIMP free photo editing software (google > Gimp > download), take a decent photo & touch it up.

yeah... not sure if its GIMP i will use.. i've used it before it was teribley horible to use compared to Photoshop Cs2... What i really should re download
Remember guys this pic was used with my phone (5mp) but it seems that i've droped it so many times its not worth it really

As a customer I would find it difficult to know what the product was you were selling from the photo and to me thats more important than the written description - visual makes your customer interested its the tool that helps to make an issue or decision clearer or easier to understand.