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[MustHaveMobiles]

Hi all,

I have been working on a dropshipping page for my site to promote affiliate links I have, will you please review the text/wording to see if it makes sense and reads right.

I am not posting this to increase sales, I want an honest opinion before I link it to a page that gets over 1000 hits a day (a JV I am about to try).

Please be brutally honest, its good for me.

Dropshipping

Mike

[paddy]

Hi Mike, overall not a bad sight !!

Couple of things may need checking
1 jewelry I could be mistaken but suggest in the UK that would be Jewellery
2 constantly update thier lists Their ??
3 products from over 234 many different categories I think this reads poorly as 234 is Many so mabye omit Many or alter in some way Not Sure about this though.

Mabye Ill call back again in a couple of days when Ive not been on the computer for hours !

Anyway Good Luck with it.

[MustHaveMobiles]

Thanks for picking up the typo's, I have corrected them (plus some more I found ) but cannot find the jewellry reference??

[paddy]

Hi Under Drop Ship Wholesale Pic !

[MustHaveMobiles]

I cannot affect that, thats a googleism..